NO. 3
Story in a box
by Laci Brune
This story maybe a little bit long, but it tells me a lot. It is easy to follow, and make good use of structure. I may feel the emotions of characters in the story. It is a good story.
NO. 2
The drummer
by Haley E
This story uses a special way to put all the inventories in a proper way. I have learned a lot from this story, especially from the boy named Charlie. A good use of word and easy to follow.
NO. 1
Accidents Happen
by Chris Crawford
This story catches me a lot, even from the beginning, and throughout the whole passage. It is a fantastic story, word use, good flow. Outstanding!
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